Friday, 30 November 2012

essay #1

            Write a story with the following beginning "i heard a strange noise downstairs. Waking up my brother,  we walked stealthily......."

            I heard a strange noise downstairs. Waking up my brother, we walked stealthily towards the noise. My brother was also frightened that he took along a broom in case we needed it. Passing through my parents' room, we realised that they were still sound asleep. Weren't they bothered by the weird sound?

            To my surprise, the ceiling on top of our living room was affected badly. There was a spherical object on my father's favourite couch. We were curious as much as we were frightened. Adrenaline running fast, and our hearts pumping. My brother then poked the weird object. Boom! a small explosion occured as we saw the object transformed into a small animal-like creature. CJ7! I blinked my eyes twice. My sight were not damaged, so a cj7 in my house was real?!

            I always liked the alien so much. I even watched the movie several times without being bored.
I approached it to give a warm welcoming hug. Out of the sudden, the cute cj7 turned into an enormous lion-like thing."Mother! This is surely not my cj7!" I thought.

             Obviously, the alien was unfriendly and it seemed like he was not pleased by my presence. It was about to attack me when my brother suddenly knocked him out with the broom he had earlier. My heart was broken. How could a cute animal turned into such ferocious beast? With tears on my cheek, I rushed to my parents' room to wake them up. At first, they did not believe me but after they heard my brother's screaming, they rushed to the living room. "Oh no! My couch!" shouted my father angrily. He made a bee line towards the cj7 but before he could reach him, the cj7 attacked my father with a ray from his eyes. Father!

            I rushed to my father and checked his breathing. He did not respond. After few seconds, i realised that he was gone. As i turned to my mother and brother, I saw that they were too, attacked by the monster. I knew by that time that my time would come.

             I was about to get beaten by the horrible creature when i heard a soft voice calling my name. "Arif, wake up. Are you having a nightmare?". It was my mother. Oh Mother! I hugged her tightly. Then i realised that there was no weird creature in my house. After the incident, I vowed not to watch cj7 again.    

Hi! :)
i know it's not an excellent essay but just to give you idea on how to spice up your essays.

recreating a story.
give it a new, unexpected ending.
be imaginative.
and strictly NO PLAGIARISM please.

happy reading and have a nice day :)

Happy Reading And Have A Nice Day ^^

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